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Some good and some bad

+Some clever dialogue
-Some annoying dialogue
+Story with a good length
-Story that is lame
-Anime influence
-Eye sores

Review

+Play button
+Making fun of anime
-But not in a good way
-A little sloppy
-Annoying sound
-Not a lot of movement
-Lame plot
-Anime

I'd suggest making fun of anime in a different way, such as making fun of the lazy/ridiculous/eye sore aspect of it, meaning things like teardrops on the side of people's faces, people all of a sudden making weird facial expressions in front of some colorful background, people having sudden mood changes, lazy animation techniques, and the rest of that pocky stuff. One way to do this would be to have anime characters interacting with logical characters.

boggles my mind

+Menu with multiple buttons
-Anime influence
-Weak/Boring/Pointless/Lame plot
+Hahahaha, to be continued
-Techno music that keeps playing
-Sloppy
-Lame animations
-Crappy dialogue

Rule responds:

I guess I'll improve on that.

Thanks for the review.

Good and Bad

+ Loading screen
+ Some good drawing/animation
+/- South park style characters
- Mix of straight lines with different brushes
- Typos (That message before the warning sign)
- Sloppy mix of sounds and music
- Counterstrike
- Sloppy sounds
- Anime influence combined with family guy

Compliment Sandwhich

+Decent sound quality
-Overdone idea
-Boring dialogue
-Unfunny dialogue
+No anime influence

escher responds:

thanx fer the feedback ...

Compliment Sandwhich

+Loading Bar
-Unfunny
-Anime Influence
-Unmatching mouths
-Annoying voices
-Lack of a plot
+Play Button

Anime Influence?

Homerun?

Not a very creative future

That was overall pretty lame, but the graphics looked very time consuming. I was thinking the shape would turn into an m and m, but was hoping that it'd be more than that.

Nice...

Frame by frame animation. This is probably not far from what I would make had I taken more time on my animations and smoked a little reefer when I was 15. The music was a little out there as it should be, but was really brought down by the percussion. Nice work.

That was pretty annoying

Good concept. Poor excecuation. You're obviously capable of drawing good backgrounds and animating, but you should lose the anime influence. I can appreciate the style through certain anime shows/movies, but I can't appreciate a guy moving from one place to another while playing video games, oversized tear drops on the side of someone's face, etc.

Gear-Zero responds:

Sorry, been doing anime since 3rd grade, can't just... change it. Also I drew it fast and with a mouse. I really don't draw like this. And this was my first animation, don't really do straight comedy anymore. Just wait and see... In about... I'll say... 2-3 months.

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